a dare

"do you love me?"
"of course."
"prove it," she said. a dare.
he curled a piece of her hair around his finger and exhaled.

the silence was suffocating.

- x -

i felt like doing a fiction friday-it's been forever since my last. this bit came from my heart.

7 comments:

  1. BaileyMay 16, 2014 at 12:54 PM

    wow. I absolutely love this. <3

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  2. :May 16, 2014 at 2:10 PM

    a passage directly from the source of lovingness . . . xo

    with love,
    les

    pea ess: i love you. <3
    pea pea ess: this is the fourth time i've said "love." •-•

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  3. nymishaMay 18, 2014 at 7:17 PM

    This is beautiful. I saw a few of your other such snippets. They say so much <3
    -Nymisha ♦

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  4. Erin MarieMay 19, 2014 at 9:22 AM

    I love this. :) Just a tiny little story, but powerful.

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  5. Brooke JordanMay 21, 2014 at 6:52 AM

    Ooh I love this!
    xoxo,
    Brooke

    Pineapples & Daisies

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  6. graceJuly 17, 2014 at 5:45 PM

    i know it's kinda old, but this is lovely. gives me butterflies.
    <3

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  7. Matthew FeargrieveNovember 19, 2019 at 9:47 AM

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