fiction friday - 2

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a single tear slips out, rolls down her cheeks. wetting the paper in her shaking hands. her shoulders tremble. head in hands, she cried. cried for what had been lost and for what cannot come back. cried for her loved ones, her enemies, for herself. she cries for the damage that cannot be undone.
a hand wraps around her heaving back, and squeezes it. she leans her head, and they cry. together.
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(where did that  come from? i honestly don't know; i was just typing randomly, and the above appeared. i know it's kinda depressing, but hey, a girl's gotta write.)

xoxo,
jessie

5 comments:

  1. That. was. beautiful.
    Truly, honestly amazing... <3

    great job! :)

    xoxo
    Mackenzie

    http://thoughts-of-a-fangirl.blogspot.com/

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  2. Yes, a girl has gotta write!! :) And that's beautiful, what you wrote.
    xoxo
    Sarah
    http://afreemindsw.blogspot.com/

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  3. whoa... (•O•) <-- my little virtual hugger is shocked. And so am I.

    that. was. flawless.

    i want you to do it again. take me to a faraway place and make me wonder. make me feel. make me believe...

    keep up the flawless work. <3

    xoxo,
    Rose

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  4. Thank you all so much. <3 It really means a lot!

    xoxo,
    Jessie

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